I think it's all good stuff. I would not change a thing. You did good this week. Keep up the good work.MikeMMerry Christmas.........

Very impressive and a very good song. I hope this song took you a long time to do because if not -- your in the wrong line of work.

I thought the song was really good and I can relate to Rob's comments. Maybe it should have read Makes me wish that this moment wouldn't last and ...

Narn, I like your song but I think any V1 needs to really grab a persons attention so that they will listen to V2 . With that in mind, I'd change V1 ...

Hey that was great. Might even be marketable with a little more work. Really, I think you could get a bite with this one....However, being an acoust...

Question -- what is rhyme scheme AABB? I'm new to this and don't have a clue what form this is!

jpsuperstar,I liked the song. Sort of Dylanish and I'm a big fan of Dylan! I especially liked war child bombs will hunt you and bodies will smile yo...

I liked your song and really like the last verseI will never feel Just how real It must be inside To live those lives Drink the wine from the wells Fa...

I liked it. The idea was good, the image "dreamy", and the title fits well the song. I especially like the line "Feel freedoms demands."

welcome Xposed. I believe songs are a form of a new self awareness or perspective. Something maybe that you lost or found, something old, new or sp...

I would only make one comment that the first verse be stronger.Something maybe likeEverybody's standing in line looking for away inYou're looking for ...

I liked it. It has a few places where it doesn't flow well (at least to the meter I have in my mind). But I thought it was well designed and worked ...