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mr. d
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Joined: Jan 18, 2005
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RE: Six Feet More - Working Title

Heh yeah I noticed that myself after I posted it. I just copied it straight from my notebook, forgetting that I wrote the whole thing in 20 minutes wh...

19 years ago
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RE: ERASE (One Night)

That is an absolutely brilliant song. Very expressive.Well done!Dillon

19 years ago
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RE: The Promised Land - Please Critique

I'm still working with the band on putting it to music, but if we record it I'll be sure to post it :)Glad you like it,Dillon

19 years ago
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RE: As of yet untitled and unfinished - Help please!

thanks lk, that's a good idea. That's really what I was looking for, a way to wrap it up. The repeated mother brother line makes it sound like the cha...

19 years ago
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RE: 3/12 tin soldiers

Very nice.I can't decide if it's literally a song about toy soldiers tangling with a cat, or if that's a symbol for something like the Iraq war. What ...

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RE: I plan to put on some heavier strings...

definitely deeper. i personally use 12s on my electrics and love the feel and the sound.

19 years ago
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RE: Artists with best lyrics?

Interesting thread, I've gained a whole new appreciation for lyricists I hadn't paid much attention to before.I love the lyrics of Johnny Cash, Dylan,...

19 years ago
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RE: Love Unspoken

Umm... well you could trim a couple of words and see if that helps, like "Meant to ask if this time I could stay, but spoke a little late" will free y...

19 years ago
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RE: Love Unspoken

Wow that's beautiful. The last verse gave me chills.The meter in it seems a little strange though, like there are more words than there need to be. Th...

19 years ago
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RE: As of yet untitled and unfinished - Help please!

Oh yeah, and feel free to critique any other aspect of the song as well. I just wanna learn :)

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