i like your lyrics for this song nothing stands out that i think should be changed its achually pretty good for the first song. i heard a bit of avril...
Hello :lol: thats funny your son uses that as his name :lol: sorry to hear about your hand man that SUCKS !! how long befor you can play again? I tot...
hey Vic good lyrics just a couple things that stuck out to me I put in my thoughts hope they can help :wink: mysticLast MouthfulThere's a mouthful le...
Hi trever nice lyrics have you recorded yet? I just seen a couple things that I would probably make changes to but all in all its goodmystic :wink: Ch...
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what kind of tune do you have in mind for this? ifeel somthing light hearted and up beet herewhen I read your lyrics, I thought jack johnson a little ...
thank you sooo much for your replies :P no offence ever taken I'm here to learn and without criticism I would be no better of than I am now :D I se...
WOW!! you sound GREAT(sorry if I sounded a little suprised I didnt mean too ))) LOL....but ya this sounds realy great and u play well toogood job Myst...
hey trever I threw a couple things in you may want to use if you like themtake care MysticSong I am workin on ..No title as yet PLease stop your lying...
Hey trever The changes you made were good but you know me I just couldnt help it as I sang it I made a few changes/additions that you may or may not l...
sounds way better than it reads but then again thats one thing I have learned about song writing alot of times the lyrics dont seem that great on ther...
thanks trever no you wont hear me singing there is no music to these lyrics and as as you probably already guessed i need male vocals and i dont know...