There is real heart to the story in this song, and I am humbled that you'd share it so publicly. You have captured some of the small details of how de...

Ouch. That's raw. it's good. But it's raw. (ex-Scrybe here :wink: )

I don't think this needs a repeated chorus tbh. I love the way you make some lines repeat themselves throughout the song and I think that suffices as ...