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oasisman
@oasisman
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Joined: Jan 29, 2003
Topics: 7 / Replies: 18
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RE: Call For You

Lyrics are good, it relays a good story, I've got nothing to add, record it.

18 years ago
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RE: It Won't Be Long - (My best work I think)

Yep, I know what you mean, there's not much substance to it, but with the music and melody it's very catchy.That's what I like about it because it's s...

18 years ago
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RE: Writing Styles

When I say 'Music First' I mean, any instrument first, like a piano tune, guitar riff, guitar chords etc. I wanted to separate it from melody, which i...

18 years ago
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RE: It’s A Cruel World Out There - First song of the new year

Verse 3 and 4 have been added.It's A Cruel World Out There© 2006 P J King(Verse 1)I know just what you are likeWhy do we fight?Why do we fight?(Verse...

18 years ago
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RE: "CLOCKS"

I have noticed you've taken my advice in labeling each section, you've gotta admit it, it does make it much more readable.The story is really good, ch...

18 years ago
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RE: Love Will - any comments

Cool, the bridge is hard to understand if you can't hear the music, all I can say is that the bass note starts a decline in the first few notes of the...

18 years ago
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RE: It’s A Cruel World Out There - First song of the new year

Bridge = Pre-chorus in my book, middle is just something different in the middle, also known as a middle 8 but mine doesn't go for 8 bars.It is "isn't...

18 years ago
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RE: New song I wrote the other day

ok, if it sounds good then it is good. :D

18 years ago
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RE: New song I wrote the other day

I like the content, it's good. :DThe way the song is structured confuses me though, :? you've got 4 lines first up and the next part I'm guessing is t...

18 years ago
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RE: Love Will - any comments

The middle is hard to describe, each line is only one bar long, and I can see them sung a little by the main singer but more by backing vocals with a ...

18 years ago
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RE: All You Need Is Rock 'n' Roll - Comments Please

I can't really describe how the melody goes, I don't know how I would do that unless I record it.The verses go Asus4 -> CAsus4x02230Cx3x033Example:...

19 years ago
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