Lyrics are good, it relays a good story, I've got nothing to add, record it.
Yep, I know what you mean, there's not much substance to it, but with the music and melody it's very catchy.That's what I like about it because it's s...
When I say 'Music First' I mean, any instrument first, like a piano tune, guitar riff, guitar chords etc. I wanted to separate it from melody, which i...
Verse 3 and 4 have been added.It's A Cruel World Out There© 2006 P J King(Verse 1)I know just what you are likeWhy do we fight?Why do we fight?(Verse...
I have noticed you've taken my advice in labeling each section, you've gotta admit it, it does make it much more readable.The story is really good, ch...
Cool, the bridge is hard to understand if you can't hear the music, all I can say is that the bass note starts a decline in the first few notes of the...
Bridge = Pre-chorus in my book, middle is just something different in the middle, also known as a middle 8 but mine doesn't go for 8 bars.It is "isn't...
ok, if it sounds good then it is good. :D
I like the content, it's good. :DThe way the song is structured confuses me though, :? you've got 4 lines first up and the next part I'm guessing is t...
The middle is hard to describe, each line is only one bar long, and I can see them sung a little by the main singer but more by backing vocals with a ...
I can't really describe how the melody goes, I don't know how I would do that unless I record it.The verses go Asus4 -> CAsus4x02230Cx3x033Example:...