PbeeI like what you have so far, and the way you're planning on doing it is a great idea.I am having some problems with the last half of the bridge, m...
DrunkRock: Of course I don't take it as you are a jerk. Hey, this is what it is all about. Post your song….get feedback….re-write, ....or don't. Y...
That is just wonderful. Thanks for sharing. I think there is going to be a Grandma with a great big smile on this year…. Nothing I would change on t...
VicSo I started to do a couple of edits on some of the lines like: “I've got to get MOVIN', and leave the past behindâ€, and: “That's OUR FUTURE ...
DrunkRockFirst of all thanks for the explanation of the Suicide girls. Now that I know what it means that line has a great “ring†to it….OK….s...
Outstanding work CeltIf I have one thing I could put my finger on it would be the first half of the intro,the descending part of it. I did not think i...
BarnabusI do not think you have to go back to the drawing board, some minor rewrites would do.What you have is kinda “cute†However the last line ...
VicCool tune. I'd like to hear it. Hopefully you will have time to post it soon.I read/sung through it a couple of times and I really did not have any...
CeltI like it a lotLike the soloing, fit nicely in with the melody.Very well doneBlessings.Olav
Wooow, Nice scratchNothing to addBlessingsOlav
I had some problems with the upload. I think it is up and running nowBlessings. OlavBarnabus, Celt and Vic. I have not done a whole lot of editing yet...