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Joined: Jun 16, 2010
Topics: 3 / Replies: 18
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Re: Song I wrote "A Cheap Hotel Room" true story

Hello kent,Yeah, that might work? As a matter of fact, that could work very well.Sorry taking so long to respond.I watched your videos. Good stuff m...

12 years ago
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Re: "Everbody's Seen The Light" would love feedback [w/mp3]

I don't know if I can add to what's already been said. So, I'll say: I whole-heartedly agree with the others.Take care

13 years ago
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Re: "I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine"

This song is truly sad and i know im not old enough to know what its like to be cheated on but this touched me. It is telling a story about a man hurt...

13 years ago
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Re: First song

Ok, kapo 4.This is an excellent song. Great lyrics. Structure is good but may be better if you try this: Open the song with your chorus, then the t...

14 years ago
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Re: "I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine"

I like it. I can "hear" it in my head, very cool. Ideas for a sound yet? Seems to me like a nasty George Thorougood type piece. Hi SGinCYQX,Thank you ...

14 years ago
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Re: (Love In) Confined Spaces

Hey Martin,Well, you came through like a champ on this one! lolVery good, don't change a thing. I like it, a lot!Take care,jody

14 years ago
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Re: New song! Been a while, too.

Excellent choice. I hope you've got lots of money though. lolGrumman Albatross, SA-16, UH-16, HU-16E, etc. are all favorites of the Coast Guard. Gr...

14 years ago
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Re: I 'm just a little older then I claim

lol, pretty cool. I haven't figgured out yet if I am an "old fart" or if i'm just a little older than I claim? I guess it doesn't matter, i'm young ...

14 years ago
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Re: New song! Been a while, too.

Well, I've been flying since 1967 and I love this song almost as much as I love flying. I wouldn't change one word. By the way, I decided not to fly...

14 years ago
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Re: "I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine"

"Heart Brake River" Not to be a Grammar Nazi, but if you are considering that as a title, you should know it's "Heart Break". Brake is only used ...

14 years ago
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Re: "I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine"

This sounds like a good'n.I hope you continue with this. Thanks KR2. I'm glad you like it.Take care,jody

14 years ago
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Re: Song I wrote "A Cheap Hotel Room" true story

Hello SG,Thanks for your time and the comments. You're right, this song can be in a variety of styles. The music I like the best for it is a cross b...

14 years ago
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Re: "I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine"

Hmm, I'm thinking Country rather than GT and the Destroyers - seems like a real crying in your beer song to me. Only problem I have is the references ...

14 years ago
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