I found some time this morning while everyone else was away, so here's the mp3."...remember you wanted this" - Jack Reacher :lol:

Thanks John and David for the comments, The second line could use a bit of a tweak, even if it's just a switch from "those" to "your." And, depending ...

Yes, now let's have a listen :note2: Plenty of time in the week :wink: We'll see

Works for me :D

Maybe something like this, its not quite right but closeHis selfless giving his innocent lifeGives hope for humanity through sacrifice just turning it...

Hi James,nice work here, the story progresses well and you choice of music fits. The only thing that piques me are these 2 lines:An innocent man made ...

Thanks for the comments James,I guess chronologically v1 & v2 needed to be swapped. My original intention was v1 sets the scene, v2 cuts back to t...

Hi James,I think Johns suggestion and the way you phrased it was brilliant, for me the that's the standout of this song. I thought it might be just a...

Hi Neil,I love it well done :D Paul

Hi James I think the cliche works perfectly in the context of the situation. Sounds like the kind of line this guy would likely come out with.Good wor...

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Thanks James,So let's hear that picking! :wink: yes that's this weekends project, Im still learning so it wont be that great :oops: cheersPaul

Hi James,I can definitely hear this song on the radio well done. Its got a sophistication that really appeals to me. I must admit though I can hear t...