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I'm thinking of changing this line Dancing, dancing with myselfI’m dancing, dancing with myself to Dancing, dancing with myselfI’m dancing, dancing ar...

Hi Neil,this is good :D. I do think you could drop this verse though dancing with ghosts late at nightno one to watch this haunting sightin the darkn...

Thanks guys,Casey, yes Tracey Chapman is one of my favourite artists.Neil, Just not clear to me the reason . . . . what compels the ghost not to leav...

My biggest problem was wanting to change tense of the title during the song. I'm not sure if that's allowed. Roy around here anythings allowed :wink...

I'm not sure why you are going with "Dancing, dancing with myself" instead of just saying "Dancing, dancing with ghosts/a ghost" ah yes the $64,000 q...

Oh yeah :D that does it nicelyPaul

Excellent song well done :D cheersPaul

Nice :D Paul

I like it :D .I think there is a balance between what is said and what is left unsaid and you as the author have decide how much of each. What James ...

For me it also reads like a chronicle and I'm trying to find that part in there that tells me why I should care about this song. I'm looking for a lyr...

This is good Vic,I'm ok with the "Dead don't weep .." line, for me it sets up and emotional context which is all good. Also I'm not too worried why th...

Nice :D Paul

Really interesting lyrics :D , the pace in my mind was quite fast. I thought that maybe somewhere in there a bridge might be nice, doesn't have to be...