Nice :D Looking forward to the mp3 if you get a chance to record it.Paul

Nice :D , I suppose you will have to call it Benny, something to keep Frida company :lol: or maybe Ragnar.Paul

Trev the link doesn't work :(

Well Trev I think this is a good song in the making. I'm not really that keen on the last line of verse 2 doesn't really add anything that the line be...

Thanks David,my son showed me how to do that strum the same weekend Vic posted the assignment, so I thought I'd strike while the iron was hot so to sp...

Thanks Trev and James for the listen.I really like this song so will re-master it and tighten up the timing of all the instruments. Also I'll re-recor...

Hi Vic,I'm reading Keefs autobiography "Life" at the moment, what a great read.I like most of your song but to be honest I don't really like the choru...

Renee,yeah great start, I do think there is something missing though, as Vic says to tie the whole thing together. It could be something as simple as ...

Hi James, very nice :D. I'm going to disagree with David here, I think the original "seams right" is far better. To me "scenes right" although it is...

I've uploaded an mp3 herecheersPaul

The guitar version is good. The mbira version is haunting. +1Paul

I love it :D I think it could apply to many individuals.cheersPaul

Thanks Neil and James.

Hi James,I like the elegance of its simplicity and can certainly imagine an African chorus harmonizing in the background there, well done :D Paul

Thanks all for the comments. I'm working on the mp3 but its a few days out yet as I've been practicing for a gig tonight. "Castles in the sky" makes i...