Wow Vic :D , Trev there is excellent advice here, you could pay a lot of money for the wisdom that Vic has offered here. Just to reinforce one point ...

Hi Sunnydunes,I like it :D . My take here that this is about a gay one night stand, if so I think that I would expand on this theme a bit. Why this i...

Hi Vic,finally getting around to looking at this weeks offerings. I like the song a lot and am in complete agreement with David with regards to swappi...

Thanks Vic :D I've had the soldering iron out and repaired the headphone jack (no wonder I couldn't get the spacial positioning I was after), anyway ...

Hi Trev, yes long time great to see you back :D I'm just catching up on GN after returning from holiday (see above). Just spent a week or so in a pla...

Thanks for comments Vic.The 2 points you raise are very valid. As far as the guitar track is concerned you may not believe it but I spent well over a ...

Thanks John,Ive uploaded the final version herethis one has a flute in the lead breakcheersPaul

Hi Vic,yes I think this works :D , I think the story your telling starting from the particular V2 (Im assuming V1 disappears) to the general V3 is g...

Thanks David, I'm going to be singing this all week, I suspect yeah me too its quite catchy :D I've revised it one more time and tightened it up a b...

Hi Andy,I think this is great :D reminds me of Cohen. If this was my song I would do 2 things with it, 1) I would repeat the "whatever" at the end aft...

HI Vic,this is my take on your bridgeA new guitar is way way out of my reach,I'm having a hard time tryin' to make ends meet,Yeah we'd all be much ric...

mp3 posted hereI've left space for a lead, I'm thinking a flute at this stagePaul

Thanks Andy and Renee.I think version 3 is nearly there. cheersPaul

Thanks David,yes I like your suggestion thanksPaul