wow.great song from disparate threads of peoples imaginations.i feel your songs are getting "tighter." (this is good!)n you're heading towards greatne...

Vik:maybe i wasn't clear? The person wants to go, thinks they should go, but won't, or can't, because they think of all the reasons to stay. So they t...

congratulations Vik. that's fabulous. i didn't know we had lama's here. in any case, i want one!

i think this is one of your best songs! it's a little less, shall we say, rambling?!!! i like the line about the lost and found office.

i had a GREAT time! My friends who are there are going bankrupt living there so i don't think i'll be moving. Wait...that may be my subject matter....

come back soon....jane

great song!

thanks for the re-write. I like it and i think you're right about it needing to be consolidated. i think yours has some potential and it has a joni mi...

I'm back! :P or maybe :shock:

the words and the music fit real well. the music and the presentation really captures the mood of the song. very nice. song.

it's vaguely Dylanish, but it's also vaguely bluesish, too!I hear this as a blues song...

happy b-day!!