Thanks and respect for taking up the cudgels, standing in the breach or whatever metaphor fits. The plans sound great - looking forward to the time a...

unless its green day or rhianna!! hahaha :P I hadn't heard of said lady until a TV ad the other night. '"The day the music died" indeed. :lol:

How I often work: grab the guitar, hit the record button and keep playing chords for a few minutes. Just drift around, repeat if it's nice, change it ...

Thanks again Bob and good luck with your ventures.

Thanks guys. I do wonder whether the the bridge may be a little long (or is it just the one paragraph ?). Yes it is only the first paragraph - I de...

Thanks to all those who have put in the time and concentration to offer these critiques.To pick up a couple of points on mine.I changed the lyric in t...

Great job! I like Paul and Chris' changes. I slightly prefer Paul's words but Chris's seems to scan more easily.The bit that I thought needed a cha...

Fables for Fooling Myself - slowplayA head on a chest that's not yet hollowLying on floors with Tracy ChapmanNights on a bench in your overcoatThese a...

I really like this. I also struggle with the meter, but it could demand an interesting tune rather than a dum-de-dum.For me the last line turns it in...

I agree with the suggestion for Armani suit.I found the meter when I read it, gave the last line rhyming with the third i.e. suit - but I can' think ...

I liked your chorus (Postcard Of A Lighthouse). The only think that struck me was that I wanted, or expected, "concrete tower on the stone" to be "on...

Hi Ray I like what you're saying here but for me the 2nd half of the chorus has a different feel to it from the first. Paul Hi Paul,For me this is a...

Hi Ray I think you mean "homey" and not "homely" in Annie's Couch. Maybe not! Hi and thanks.I think the American and UK take on this word is differe...

Ah, Stingy Brim, Stingy BrimHe's cool and tight, taut and trim Fast and mean and slick and slimDon't you wish that you were him… Like this one v...