I agree with Ken, your lyrics are very good. The issue is that if people find them confusing or "clunky" or don't understand what you are trying to s...

I think for me the best way is to record yourself improvising melodies over the song. That way any awesome ideas get captured and you can go over the ...

raevin - If you are still looking for some insight on writing songs check out the thread 'The chicken or the egg question'.There you will find forum m...

Sid - some times its best to just start writing anything that comes to mind. You can go back later and put it into a more organized structure. Its O...

Though I have taken lyrics/poems I have written and put music to them this is not my preferred or usual approach.I usually start by playing through di...

Thanks Noteboat. It seems like I need to do some more research before jumping in.Is there anyone else out there who is a member of any of these organ...

Once again B Disaster you shun critique and suggestions. As you seem full of yourself, again I ask why do you post here? Perhaps you feel we all nee...

The dash is not relevant here.Everything is fine as it is. OkWhy did you post these lyrics here? You seem to not be open to any comments. Are they ...

My 3 ring binder has only songs I am presently working on or that are part of my repertoire. I do not like to take it on stage, I figure if I'm going...

Come over to my house and see what I sawCome hurry to my house, you can't be lateNext door they are waiting to call in the lawAnd its been a whole mon...

Perhaps "another" would work better in this line if it was written as such: "Are just pain's - another guise".This way it seems to read a little smoot...

Does anyone else have any resources for learning blues or scales or theory, other than programs like Amazing Guitar Secrets?Good books or perhaps othe...