finally an honest christmas song - none of this world peace love understanding reindeer bells snow lark!i like they way u use the train, GI Joe etc to...

hi,i enjoyed reading this, its all great apart from what i think is an inconsistency in the lyrics:'Living down' means hiding from view, pretending it...

for a first attempt at songwriting, it is certainly very impressive.the new lines work well.as for the way the SSG works, a task gets posted every sun...

nice song, i like the twist in the chorus at the end.bit concerned though about the lines:'With a cold and wicked grin With a tear in his eye and look...

hi had to read it a second time to get it, but thats a good thing.great descriptions and imagerygood workrob :)

hi scratch thanks for the comments, i've changed it to lest, my spelling is abismable!'sod all' is fairly slangy i guess, it basically means 'nothing'...

hi scratchexcellent stuff, i like the 'reminising with a hint of humour' tonenot so sure how well railroad tracks fit in with robin hood, dragons dams...

a nice simply song, only thing is it doesnt really go anywhere, there no sense of conclusion in the lyrics, the song just ends.perhaps a verse on 'wha...

enchanting would be the word for this song i think.good work,rob:)

hiya,i like it all, except verse 2, especially the ending, i was wondering how u were going to slip page 65 in as i was reading it.i dont get how vers...

hi guys,thanks a lot for your comments, i'm glad the humour was entertaining to someone other than me! u never can be sure;)i take your points celt, t...

hireading the song again with your explaination has helped me get a better handle on it.if u can make the jet thing work then definately go for it.you...