It's my perogative I would ditch that line for somewhat obvious reasons. :)
As for the "percussive jam" as I call it ... you could try just playing the chords of either the verse or the chorus .. but with a bit more power and ...
Okay that solves it .... I think you need to show somewhere in the song that she doesn't return the feelings he has. That would totally clear it up f...
You know I"ve been listening to this a couple of times and rereading it ... I get the point of the song .. but what I don't get is ... (drum roll)What...
Dude ... that was totally not what I was expecting. I really like the way you distort your vocals ... totally fits the mood of the music. Just a cou...
Ditto to what Nick said.I was being facetious - and maybe that wasn't appropriate especially since if misunderstood is exactly what someone asking for...
This is by the far the shortest piece I've seen from you. Though ... short, simple and to the point - definitely not your typical style but I think i...
Oh yeah ... (the sequel) ... you should also check out Pearl Jam's version of Masters of War .. it's also pretty nicely done. It's on the Live at Ben...
Oh yeah ... I know this a "drone" song ... so no choruses .. etc.. But at least put a space in between verses :)
Dude I dig it ... and thanks for the "Masters of War" hint .. that really helped me figure out how to read the song.At first glance, I thought it was ...
Hmm ... you know what .. I'm giving this a different look ... you know what it kind of reminds me off ... or at least what I think it could sound like...
Cool, I'll record it when I get my thoughts together and as soon as the Oktoberfest is over... heh ... this is the worst time of the year!!!I have it ...
Oh yeah .. and SCREW theory ... yep, I said it. My guitar skills probably reflect that as well ... .but .. screw it. You can bore yourself all day w...
Well, judging from the chords and the "personal" nature of the song - something tells me it's a slow sad one ... or melancholy at any rate. Here's a ...