hey brill paul, clear recording great timing,and you have an effortless vocal....it works for me...smoke

music ain,t easy trev if you want to do it well..when i think back its the stuff that you have to take on the chin by way of criticism that makes you ...

well i think paul has demonstrated this well here :D you can do what you want with it really try staying at the 7th for a few strums then once at the...

i have been working on this number myself over the past 3 months and still its not on the money :cry: so i know how hard this is. My advice is dont m...

ok trev i first heard it and it did,nt hit me quite right when you moved the chord of d....so try this when you move the d chord take it up to the 5t...

Hi KEN , sax would be nice in a freaked out jazzy style and hammond organ.....BUT!! i downloaded the mp3 so i am going to play around with harp in par...

at last i can hear what you do! good listening site this margaret...as for the music its BRILL :D and i am glad you got to the end before the high ti...

hell thats moving :twisted: :twisted: love that bass, clever stuff 8) smoke

well i felt it would be better to start as you have but then burst it open into a clear sound with a full sing vocal rather than keep the dark secret ...

its 10 out of 10 for me :D really REALLY good this, it breaths !! well done paul pleasure to hear it...smoke

interesting arrangement, good with light effects i bet :twisted: :twisted:

i think this would get across better if it was speeded up some :twisted: and vocals would make it interesting as well :wink: right direction thoug...

got this sorted ok all nicely together, vocal falls a bit short but hell this ain,t easy :wink:

keep us up to speed on the end product vic, vocal is good as normally..best smoke

i could work with this bass playing...does it for me 8) agree with tasco really