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sozay
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Joined: Oct 23, 2002
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RE: Year 4 Wk 5 The Devil Won't Have Me

lol, i do indeed recognise that quote. awesome song, would totally suit a dirty gruff blues. I like the repeated lines, and the variation in the last...

19 years ago
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RE: Year 4 Wk 5 The Devil Won't Have Me

lol, i do indeed recognise that quote. awesome song, would totally suit a dirty gruff blues. I like the repeated lines, and the variation in the last...

19 years ago
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RE: SUNDAY SONGWRITER'S GROUP - WEEK 5

i wasn't thinking nessaecarily use a cliche. i was thinking more along the lines of a famous quote that means something to you or inspires you. If an...

19 years ago
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RE: Y3W4 - No Name #7 - Sozay

thanks all. if you've ever seen good will hunting then you've heard elliott smith. his song 'miss misery' from that was nominated for an oscar (but l...

19 years ago
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RE: guitar pics like socks

I'm a believer in the "plectoral critical mass theory" (plectoral from the latin for picks :P) That being that as you buy picks you loose them at a c...

19 years ago
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RE: Week 4--Just a Man

only one criticism. superman has a red 's' :Pi love the lines "when you were working extra hours, i thought you were saving lives."I like the whole th...

19 years ago
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RE: Mr. Kurt Cobain - Wk. 4 SSWG

This is a good start poeticsmile. i like the internal rhyme in the first line of the second verse. Its all very 'solid' and if you expand on it to in...

19 years ago
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RE: SUNDAY SONGWRITER'S GROUP WEEK 47

waltz #2 by elliott smithalso his songs waltz #1 and miss misery, amongst others

19 years ago
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RE: Emotional Elusion (pbee) week 32(revised)

hey mystic,this is a good song about trust (or lack there of) however something was nagging at me as i read it. and i think it was that i just find it...

19 years ago
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RE: WK 32 - teach me to fail correctly

in a dark room you can still see the shape of a person, even details by the light coming in from outside, but you cant really tell exactly where a per...

19 years ago
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RE: WK 32 - teach me to fail correctly

hey gg,agreed with pb about the couple of phrase in the chorus you need to rethink, and perhaps the last line of the second verse "i just want everyth...

19 years ago
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RE: Week 32 - Opening night

knock back? perhaps in a sense, i was thinking more along the lines of a father who leave his family, the first verse the child is listening to the pa...

19 years ago
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RE: SSG3W32 - Quick Sketch

well, initally instead of "so he goes" i had a 'chorus' ofAnd so he'll be leaving soonTo fly over the moonWith the help of the spoonwhich twists a nur...

19 years ago
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RE: SSG3W32 - Quick Sketch

"wants to be finished" can be read in two ways, and that perhaps hold the key to where he wants to go. lol, my answer is even moer vauge than the lyri...

19 years ago
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