lol, i do indeed recognise that quote. awesome song, would totally suit a dirty gruff blues. I like the repeated lines, and the variation in the last...

lol, i do indeed recognise that quote. awesome song, would totally suit a dirty gruff blues. I like the repeated lines, and the variation in the last...

i wasn't thinking nessaecarily use a cliche. i was thinking more along the lines of a famous quote that means something to you or inspires you. If an...

thanks all. if you've ever seen good will hunting then you've heard elliott smith. his song 'miss misery' from that was nominated for an oscar (but l...

I'm a believer in the "plectoral critical mass theory" (plectoral from the latin for picks :P) That being that as you buy picks you loose them at a c...

only one criticism. superman has a red 's' :Pi love the lines "when you were working extra hours, i thought you were saving lives."I like the whole th...

This is a good start poeticsmile. i like the internal rhyme in the first line of the second verse. Its all very 'solid' and if you expand on it to in...

waltz #2 by elliott smithalso his songs waltz #1 and miss misery, amongst others

hey mystic,this is a good song about trust (or lack there of) however something was nagging at me as i read it. and i think it was that i just find it...

in a dark room you can still see the shape of a person, even details by the light coming in from outside, but you cant really tell exactly where a per...

hey gg,agreed with pb about the couple of phrase in the chorus you need to rethink, and perhaps the last line of the second verse "i just want everyth...

knock back? perhaps in a sense, i was thinking more along the lines of a father who leave his family, the first verse the child is listening to the pa...

well, initally instead of "so he goes" i had a 'chorus' ofAnd so he'll be leaving soonTo fly over the moonWith the help of the spoonwhich twists a nur...

"wants to be finished" can be read in two ways, and that perhaps hold the key to where he wants to go. lol, my answer is even moer vauge than the lyri...