no, no need to rework it, us aussies can slowly start to 'australianise' the world, to slow/reduce the americanisation :P

hey jojolargo,this is a cool laidback piece, which i can hear with a country twang or a jack johnson type sound. structure-wise its solid, and the im...

...so.... is this just too vague then?

Hey Lottokingcan hear this as on of those really happy boppy beatles songs, the chorus especially, and then the last verse perhaps being played of the...

hey bluenightangel,as long as this looks it read quite well. it a very interesting song, have the two voices discusssing well idealism and realism, (t...

the Set to stun rewrite is awesome. the chorus is hilarious. you'd have to sing the "phaser to..... stun" in that stop start way that kirk talks!! lol...

thanks doc, i kindof envisage it as elliott smith style lush guitar pop... lol

Hey pierson,i like the title. i definitely prefered the second version, it seemed a bit more structured. (and it doesnt have "i scream' something some...

Hey Joe,Just thought i'd chip in with a 'nice work, i like it'. I like the whole paralzing stare and changing it from stun to kill, very clever. every...

Hey pbee,Liked the second version much more, and i will have a listen to the mp3 tonite, when i am at home. the second version just seems more concis...

Hey Doc,i quite liked reading this. i assume your talking about sri lanka? my girlfriend is from there and her family used to own tea plantation there...

I like it nick, reckon it sounds like the chorus to a sleazy swamp blues/rock song. from that point of view i would say 'the things we DO at night', s...