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Re: Y9 W22 Secret Ambition

I've not posted in awhile. I read the prompts every week but usually draw a blank or start something but just don't get enough to post.Should probably...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9 W22 Secret Ambition

Hi Chris,I like the sea shanty with the accountant twist thing you have going on. You've done really well alsoat keeping your rhymes in order. I do no...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W18 - Golden

Thanks for the suggestions I can see how it is confusing. I started out thinking a Dan Zanes quasi-kid party song...the bourbon line is not nailed in ...

12 years ago
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12 years ago
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Re: Y9W17 In Love Again

Nice job. I like your writing.I like this verse the way it is but it seems like the last two lines could be stronger. I immediately visualizeda ship w...

12 years ago
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Re: Year 9 Week 17 - Black Out

Horror Punk! I love it! I think it's great.Ernie

12 years ago
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Re: SSG Year 9 - Week 15

But I know,if we act from our heartsand not from our hurts,the rough-weather times will pass by. I am wondering about this because in love it is our...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W15 Fog and Drizzle

I am thinking a movie with Samuel L Jackson as Detective Jerome Drizzle.

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W14 St. 451

Hi James,Really like this one. You've got some cool chord harmony going on, majors where you'd expect minor,that sort of thing and the melody is inter...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9 W13 - Week Thirteen

Interesting lyrics. I've been contemplating the difference between literal story songs and songs that might bedescribed a poetic but are less obvious ...

12 years ago
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Re: 9-13 10 Minute Cha Cha

Good writing. Not sure why it's called Cha Cha.I like the way the verse ending flows:10 minutes on the snooze alarmNever did a bit of harmI can relate...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W10 I’ve Changed

I guess I should have realized that the switcheroo was intentional from a seasoned SSG veteran. Well it worked :wink:

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W10 I’ve Changed

Hi James,Like the recording. I like the continuously strummed guitar and the chord choices. Really gives it momentum.I'm thinking conversational so th...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W9 Mark of the Beast 666

Well James you've certainly brought out the devil on this one. :twisted: :lol: I agree pretty much with the other comments. The bible reference woul...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W8 Summer

Hi James,I am also impressed that you put this out so fast. I like how summer is glad to show up but insulted when askedto leave.Ernie

12 years ago
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