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sytys
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Joined: Jan 9, 2006
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RE: w 46 - mind reader - mp3 telepathy

hey guys, thanks for the input, John your right about those lines, i put the date line in to show the machines application but the line's not very uni...

17 years ago
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RE: SUNDAY SONGWRITER'S GROUP - WEEK 46

hey Bob, love the assignments keep em coming, just wondering about the how the weeks were messed up, did we start the year in Nov. or are we trying to...

17 years ago
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RE: Y4week45 about a vacuum

hey bluenightangel, i like this song, it has a good flow, especially the first two verses and the chorus, one line that i stumbled over at first was "...

17 years ago
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RE: w 45 - shoelaces

hey Vic, thanks for the feed back, i musta had one too many barley pops before i sat down to write, cheers.m

17 years ago
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17 years ago
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RE: w38 - we'll see - revised mp3

i've reworked the song a bit, took your advice and cut out the geetar verse and the D, playing it A G verse and C F G chorus, and added a verse, i thi...

17 years ago
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RE: w 44 - you know

thanks for the feed back, the back story, well some guys broke into my house so me and my girl had to take them out, then i found out my girl was chea...

17 years ago
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17 years ago
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RE: Year 4 Week 44 Think I'm Gonna Get Drunk/MP3

hey John, i like the song as well, as for "party" there's tons of great words, chug, slug, pound, piss, bottle, booze, well done, good song.marty

17 years ago
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RE: w38 - we'll see - revised mp3

thanks Neil, the strumming pattern i'm using in the verse is D / G and C F G //for the chorus, pretty simple, i'm working on developing ...

18 years ago
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RE: w38 - we'll see - revised mp3

i hacked out a pretty rough mp3 of the song, keep in mind i'm a bad singer and a worse guitarist, took me about 20 takes to get this, and it's flawed,...

18 years ago
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RE: Year 4 Wk 38 Childhood Days

hey John, nice song, flows well, straddles the years, the only line out of place for me is the last one, Time sometimes just fades away, i think it's ...

18 years ago
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RE: Y4week38 night time relief

hey bluenightangel, like the song, long friendship is good, the one part (or word) that stuck out at me was Johnson, though "Johnson's song" sings nic...

18 years ago
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RE: w38 - we'll see - revised mp3

hey, ya, thanks guys, good call on the verse, by gee tar i meant guitar and by bongs i meant bongos, the beatable ones as opposed to the soft bubbley ...

18 years ago
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