Hey sytysvery nice song, but I would just like to make two small suggestions and 1 optional1.forgiving all my sins...to..Forgiving everything this wi...

First I'd like to thank you for your commentssecond I'd like to say it all made sense in my headthe chorus is related to the last line of each verseTh...

Hey chefieI think the song is fine I also have to agree about the rhyme, verse 3 and 4 ,Though I think the main rhyme is at the end of each three lin...

Come for an hour stay for a moment Stay for the rest of your life....(STYX...Sing for the day)Welcome back Rahul.

Hey DneckI like the song...but (here comes my opinion)Instead of.....But nothing could be more.How about...But nothing could mean more.and then..We pi...

Hey ElledeeSorry it took so long for me to get back.I like what you have to say in your songs and can personally identify with every one of them.But I...

Hi ElledeeWelcome to Guitar Noise First things first you'll see this alot...The best way to get people to comment on your songsis to comment on their ...

Hey pixnstringsThank you for your kind words, and I realize that 24 years is a long time, but this is the first time that I've actually just wanted to...

Hey gjbrakeThanks for your commentNo, it has not happened, at least not to my knowledge and I pray that nothing does happen. however I do feel that I ...

Hey maxwellI like this My first impression is that it's about someone calling for their first date or something along that line. If not let me know.If...