That is a cool coincidence about the black and white photos. I like your suggestions, and another line I think I need to change is "Her death was trau...

You definitely had the right interpretation of the lyrics by the way...

Hey thanks again for the suggestions. I seem to have a consistent problem with my attempts at writing lyrics so far. I like lyrics that have a lot of...

Thanks again :)Essentially it's just about a person who feels like there's something wrong with him and he doesn't know what. You're right the images ...

Thanks again for the suggestions.I know it's sometimes okay for one line to run into the other (enjambment), but I guess it would have to be if there ...

Thanks again for the suggestions. One of these next times, I'll definitely try the title first way...It is about this man not having any free will, bu...

Will do, thanks. Still thinking about that first verse...