hey my first song was kind of dark n ballad ish, this ones more upbeat, kind of in 'razorlight' style, tell me what ya think
V
Did the moon just move
Or was it a trick of the eye
I cant see f*ckin anything
Since you left me blind
I talk to all of the dudes
Who hang around looking cool
They dnt seem to catch my drift no more
I guess im not the same as you
C
Nobody wants to feel like this
Especially tonight
We're tryna have some fun down here
And you ruin it when you don't smile
So forget about what she just said
And dance utill you fall my friend
Ba ba ba ba ba da ba
V
I cant remember a thing
You took my troubles away
Can I fall in love with u?
And go through it all again?
I talk to all of the dudes
Who hang around looking cool
I guess I don't need them anymore
Coz baby I got you
C
Nobody wants to feel like this
Especially tonight
We're tryna have some fun down here
And you ruin it when you don't smile
So forget about what she just said
And dance untill you fall my friend
Ba ba ba ba ba da ba ba ba ba ba ba da ba
Ba ba ba ba da
well i like it but theres a few faults in this song,
but don't take my advice since im not the greatest at this kind of stuff
Since you left me blind
I talk to all of the dudes
Who hang around looking cool
They dnt seem to catch my drift no more
this doesn't flow very well
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
yeah i see what u mean when you read it, i think that when i phrase it it goes much better! But thanks for the advice man
They didn't seem to catch my drift
making me look like a fool
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It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
yeh that seems to work better actually! cheers!
cheers cheers cheers! oiu oiu oiu!
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
