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(@guitargeek)
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Aileen
doesn't have a smile
Takes it in her stride
And runs away for a while
Aileen
doesn't have a home
So there's no place to go
When she feels all alone

Oh Aileen
Where dya go
They came looking for you
But you were moving on
so..

Sadness brings out the killer in me
Loneliness surrounded by misinformation
Happiness is never the only key
Someone find the answer to stopping me

Aileen
doesn't need a break
From the moment she wakes
She chokes and suffocates
Aileen
She just doesn't care
Theres nothing there
Except a grudge to bear

Oh Aileen
Where dya go
They came looking for you
But you were moving on so..

Sadness brings out the killer in me
Loneliness surrounded by misinformation
Happiness is never the only key
Someone find the answer to stopping me

Oh Aileen
Where dya go
They came looking for you
But you were moving on
Oh Aileen
Where dya go
They came looking for you
But you were moving on
Always moving on
She's always moving on


   
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(@lord_ariez)
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I like this piece allot, the repetition works very well here. What style of music do u plan to use for it?

'You and I in a little toy shop, bought a bag of balloons with the money we got"

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(@guitargeek)
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you ever heard Nirvana's unplugged album? its in the style of that i'd say!


   
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(@lord_ariez)
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Thats what I was hoping for :)

I really like the line at the beginning about how she doesnt have a smile, that line has a very good impact I would say. The only thing I don't really like to much about this is the second line of your chorus. I cant pick out what exactly I dont like but something is not right in my opinion. Keep up the good work!

Are you planning on creating and recording music for this?

'You and I in a little toy shop, bought a bag of balloons with the money we got"

feel free to talk with me on msn at [email protected]..... no icq anymore


   
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(@guitargeek)
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i have no means or recording :( but hopefully in the future i can work with another guitar player and go forward from there


   
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(@jadiny)
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wiked song. did you get the inspiration from the aileen wournos documentry. just curious :)

Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.

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yes, its strange, i never thought i would have compassion for a 'serial killer' but i just felt compelled enough to write something like this! since then ive watched the movie and everything!


   
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it's good to take inspiration from things you know. I'd kinda feel weird watching the movie after that and everything. i feel sorry for her neva should of died.
great song anyway guitargeek :)

Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.

--Mark Twain


   
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