What do you think, eh? I cant seem to write a good bridge.
Suspension
Has carried you
Redemption
Has seen you through
To an early morning, bright afternoon
And a thought may filter past
Your broken loveless cast
A cast is just a cast away at sea
Chorus
Now your falling away from me
Falling away from me
Falling away and Can't you see, you got to go so I can leave
Direction
Which way to go
Defection
Could you ever know
That I was thinking of you, that I was breathing of you
A thought may filter past
I'm going much too fast
A broken mast is just a sailor lost at sea
The king of rock, some say lives
the lizard king, is surely dead
the king of France, lost his head
the King of Kings... bled
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I don't know, I liked it, but I had a go at changing some things.
To an early morning, bright afternoon
And this thought comes filtering past
You're between the sky and harvest moon
I wish you'd never return
That I was thinking of you, that I was breathing of you
and this thought comes filtering past
This can't go on, we can never work through
I wish you'd never return
Heck. Yours is probably better, but I'm just aiming to contribute more. Good work.
We're like The Beatles, except there's four of us.