This song is dedicated to my best friend due to the other day, she tried to cut herself
Holding On
Verse One
If you're living in the gutter,
Or living in a big house.
If you're eating fancy,
Or scabbing like a mouse.
Open your ears,
And listen to me.
These words can help you,
Become who you want to be.
Chorus:
Listen up brothers and sisters,
Who are living lives like a plan.
Never let go even when tempted,
By a woman or man.
Just keep holding on,
And you won't be mad.
Just keep holding on,
Even if you're sad.
Verse Two:
Tear running down your face,
Because you're sad.
Ruining your room up,
Because you're angry and mad.
Open your eyes,
And see what I see.
Just scream out loud,
And then you're free.
Chorus
Bridge:
Don't let go like people in the past.
Don't let go and learn to try.
Don't let go like people now.
Don't let go cause people will cry.
Chorus (2 xs)
Hold on, Hold on, Hold on,
Just keep holding on
Jake Gyllenhaal/my oh my/your so cute/you make me sigh! I <3 JAKE!
HI'YA
What you have posted is very nice , I read this a few times and was left unsatisfied as almost as this needs another verse ? maybe , thats how I felt anyway but don't take my opion to heart I'm sure others will disagree with me .
Good writting
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
yea it sets the mood so well, and makes me think,... i dont even know what to say right now...
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
heh, sounds like a song i wrote...very nicely written...great!
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-Nick
I like it a lot. The only thing I would suggest is to change the line "Ruining your room up,". The alliteration doesnt really seem to work. I would substitue ruining to messing. Thats just my opinion, take it for what worth you want
