just wrot this off the top of the noodle any feed back is great
thanks mystic
I caught u lookin
I caught u lookin
U were cookin,
She caught me peekin
And started beekin
U caught my eye
U were being sly
Showin me those thighs
Hike, hike that skirt ..... lil bit higher
I'm in so deep
I'm feeling the heat
Your so sweet
I can't retreat
Sounds like todays rap music! :x
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I"M not into rap music either
I just write whats playin in my mind
and thats what it happened to be, just thougt
it sounded ok for just off the top an wanted to hear your feed back
thanks mystic
No offense dude, but I'm just not into that sort of stuff. Makes me get mad. But most people would probably like it, no offense intended dude.
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Ok, sorry for that harshness. I was just really pissed off and cynical. It sounds sort of like status quo rock n roll lyrics to me, which would work, but don't you want to do better than anyone ever has?
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:D absalutly
I took your words with a grain of salt
and realized the song kinda sucked anyway :lol:
thanks for the input
mystic
