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Love song to tragedy

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(@screamoguy)
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this is the last one i have thats finished. this is about my ex-girlfriend and i would like to know if you like it or not.

(Verse 1)

Second thoughts, elude me now,
Cause I know that, the right choice has been made.
When I think of you, all my sad thoughts,
Leave my mind, and I'm left stranded with you.

(Chorus)

She wipes the tears, away when I cry,
She lets me know, everything's all right,
I know it might be too soon,
But I think I'm falling in love with you.

(Verse 2)

Love song to tragedy, as this hits my heart,
I would cry if I knew where to start,
It's not over yet, but we need to slow down,
But like you so much, I'm so happy I found

(Bridge 1)

You fill me up till I overflow,
And I don't feel better than before.
I feel obligated to change my ways,
I don't how to feel, I'm running out of things to say.
I know this can be a beautiful thing,
Or it can be a tragedy…

Hi, Im mike

"I dont know what world war III will be fought with, but world war IV will be fought with sticks and stones" -Albert Einstien


   
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(@guitargeek)
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another song! well out of the three that you have posted this is by far the best! it just flows brilliantly and is very clear about whats its about.


   
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(@screamoguy)
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Joined: 19 years ago
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sorry i just singed up and didnt know how to get my name out so, but tahts it ive hit a rut since than and cant write. and thanks for making me feel and home guitargeek :D

Hi, Im mike

"I dont know what world war III will be fought with, but world war IV will be fought with sticks and stones" -Albert Einstien


   
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