if anyone wants to use these feel free.
I am not doing anything with them. I call it The Train
but to each their own.
"All Aboard The Train"
Life's too short for yesterdays,
It moves along to fast.
So if the ride gets bumpy,
While you are looking back,
Go up front,and you may find,
Your life has jumped the track.
It's alright to remember
That's part of history
But up front's where it's happening
There's so much mystery.
The enjoyment of living
Is not where we have been
It's looking forward
To another year or ten.
It's searching all the byways
Never should you refrain
For if you want to live life
YOU"VE Gotta drive THE TRAIN.
Some folks ride the train of life
Looking out the rear
Watching miles of life roll by
And marking every year.
They sit in sad rememberance
Of wasted days gone by
And curse life for what it was
And hang their head and cry.
But I don't concern myself with that
I took a different vent
I look forward to what life holds
And not what has been spent.
So strap me to the engine
As securely as can be
I want to be out in front
To see what I can see.
I want to feel the winds of change
Blowing in my face
I want to see what life unfolds
As I move from place to place.
I want to see what's coming up
Not looking at the past
it's a a rough draft but works for me as is
Heroes Don't wear capes.They wear Dog tags
Howdy tactful. I like your song. A much needed positive outlook.
Since it's a rough draft, I edited the last part only
with a few suggestions, such as standardizing the syllable count
and adding some internal rhymes:
As written:
I want to feel the winds of change =8
Blowing in my face =5
I want to see what life unfolds =8
As I move from place to place =7
I want to see what's coming up =8
Not looking at the past =6
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Suggested edit:
I want to feel the winds of change =8
When blowing in my face =6
See the wheels of life rearrange =8
Zeal for life, place to place =6
I want to see what life can cast =8
Not looking at the past =6
Kingwood Kowboy
Author of over 6,600 song lyrics
http://www.kingwoodkowboy.com/
Looks and sounds good.
please feel free to use it.
edit it - whatever. it was put up for anyone to do what they want with it.
unfortunately stopped writing a long time ago.this is just one of several projects
more finished than drafts.maybe I will put more up.Right a positive outlook
was the idea anyway.Thank you for the compliment too lwj001
Heroes Don't wear capes.They wear Dog tags
OK tactful, here's the whole edit:
Gotta Drive The Train
Now, life's too short for yesterdays =8
The sort of thing with no delays =8
If life's ride is the bumpy kind =8
Just slide up front and you may find =8
Maybe while you were looking back =8
Your life has jumped right off the track =8
Now, it's alright to remember =8
For that's just part of history =8
But up front's where it's happening =8
Up where there's so much mystery =8
The real enjoyment of living =8
Well, it's not back where we have been =8
Just look forward with thanksgiving =8
To another new year, or ten =8
Life is searching all the byways =8
Never should you ever refrain =8
Because if you want to live life =8
You have all gotta DRIVE THE TRAIN =8
Now, some folks ride the train of life =8
But always looking out the rear =8
Just watching miles of life roll by =8
Silently marking off the years =8
They just sit in sad rememberance =8
Of wasted days and nights gone by =8
Then they curse life for what it was =8
And hang their mournful head and cry =8
I don't concern myself with that =8
Cause I took a different vent =8
I look forward to what life holds =8
And not backward to what I've spent =8
So now, strap me to the engine =8
Make it as secure as can be =8
Cause I want to be out in front =8
To see all life that I can see =8
I want to feel the winds of change =8
When it's blowing right in my face =8
See the wheels of life rearrange =8
Zeal for life, going place to place =8
I want to see what life can cast =8
Cause I'm not looking at the past =8
Kingwood Kowboy
Author of over 6,600 song lyrics
http://www.kingwoodkowboy.com/
Excellent lwj001 : I like it! now that's what I would call a finished set of lyrics.don't think l could improve it any better than you did -schweet :D
P. S. as a somgwrite suggestion perhaps the last line could use the whole word because as Cause was used perhaps once too often otherwise the above statement stands.have to look at the others now that I've seen what can be done -Enjoy
Heroes Don't wear capes.They wear Dog tags
