hey i wrote this last night when i wasnt feeling so good, its kinda punky and short but its supposed to be like that.
my anthem
I'm just a weirdo and I have no life
You wont see me I only come out at night
I've got a victim tattoo
And I'm used to being used
I'm a loser and you haven't got a clue
I'm just a loner and I never go out
I hear voices so please try not to shout
Friends, I've got few
And I'll never be like you
I'm a loser and you haven't got a clue
And at this rate
I'll have gone insane
By the time that I turn twenty eight
Coz I let everybody down
And I wear a sorry frown
I'm a loser and I'll never leave the house
i like this a lot. Definetly punk rock....the sarcastic approach (or wot appears 2 b a sarcastic approach) definetly sells the song...kinda like a "yeah im a loser but get over it" kinda feel....Almost as though you had to write this song just to bury the subject....if ya get wot i mean?
Good Good, Keep It Up!!
NeM H
Rain Shadow
hey guitargeek good song just one thing you said though. i only come out at night. down abit more you said i'll never leave the house its a good punky song don't think im critisising it jus a lil confused.
thanks :)
Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.
--Mark Twain