So I started getting some vocals going with my band. Tonight me and my bassist wrote this song. Tell me what you think and what we can/should change.
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Your Curls
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I had it all planned out
a speech to change your heart
a beginning, middle, end
but there were no good parts
I started with a hook
my thesis was sound
But when i mouthed the words
You ran me into the ground
Give me a hand
Pick me up from this mess
All my mud
Stained your blue dress
come on girl
dont be like that
you straighten your curls
you overreact
and it seems like a song
but the melody lacks
so lets try to sing along
we can harmonize back
Youre acting strange
and I dont know why
It seems you changed
Is there another guy
It wasnt that much
It was only a buzz
I wanted your attention
I couldnt get enough
I wasnt that bad
but i wasnt the best
I had to tell you
I had to lighten my chest
come on girl
dont be like that
you straighten your curls
you overreact
and it seems like a song
but the melody lacks
so lets try to sing along
we can harmonize back
I wasnt that bad
but i wasnt the best
[repeat to fade]
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©Taylor Romoser, Eric Chalk 2006
aka Izabella
Hey Izzy!
I like the bridge a lot! Can't wait to hear them when you get the music worked out....yahh but thats normally the hardest part.
