Hey everyone wondering what you think of this new song I wrote... Maybe what I could do to make it better etc...
I wanna be with you
Do you want to be with me too
I would be there for you
Would you be there for me too
We could walk to the beach
Feel the sand against our feet
We could hang at the park
Until it's getting dark
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With the sun shining on my head
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With you lying next to me in my bed
I would stand at your door
Until I couldn't beg anymore
So many things I have missed
‘Cus you're putting me through this
As long as we could last
Time won't go past
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With the sun shining on my head
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With you lying next to me in my bed
I'm Waking I'm Waking
But the suns going down instead
I'm Waking I'm Waking
But the suns going down instead
As long as we could last
Time won't go past
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With the sun shining on my head
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With you lying next to me in my bed
I'm Waking I'm Waking
But the suns going down instead
Special K
Good song but I'm having troubles figuring out what it's about
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I'm afraid I'm lost your obviously waking and you have ( broken up ) with some one maybe ?
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
I kind of follow you but it seems to me that you want to be with someone / you are with someone/your braking up with someone, so it's kinda like there are to many sides to your story
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With the sun shining on my head
I'm Waking, I'm Waking
With you lying next to me in my bed
maybe you could say
I wanna be waking, waking
with the sun shining on my head
I wanna be waking,waking
with you lying next to me in my bed
good luck
