This is a lyric I have just written. It still needs a few changes. Maybe I should add a few lines. I'm not sure about the title yet. "Make it on my own" or "No Regrets" maybe...?
V1:
They tried to bring me down
I'm still not breaking
You let me fall to the ground
But I'll still make it
Make it on my own
I'm better off alone
They said I was good at nothing
They said I was slowly killing you
You were so blind to believe it
Now you're crying cause I'm leaving you
The love you gave me was never true
Chorus:
They killed my dreams
I brought them back to life
They killed our love
But somehow I survived
They sold my soul
But I bought I back
I'll make it on my own
I have no regrets
V2:
They tried to steal my pride
It's not stolen
You chose to be on their side
Now it's over
Over for you and me
I'm finally free to dream
They said I was just using you
They said my love for you was a lie
You were a fool to believe it
My love was true, but you were so blind
The love I gave was a waste of time
Chorus:
They killed my dreams
I brought them back to life
They killed our love
But somehow I survived
They sold my soul
But I bought I back
I'll make it on my own
And I have no regrets
You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!
hey! i liked your song, it was good although sometimes the words you used were a little repetitive, all i would say to do with this is see if you can change a few words to give a little more edge but apart from that i lik it!
it's good I like it alot.
HI
is there a typo here ?
They killed my dreams
I brought them back to life
They killed our love
But somehow I survived
They sold my soul
But I bought I back
I'll make it on my own
I have no regrets
should it not say Ibrought it back ?
apart from that I thought it was good but not as good as other songs you have posted , it seems a little rushed maybe to get to the end .
I would love to see in this piece more about them , who are they ?
as for title " Killed love " that will get everyone reading it
cheers
L.K :arrow:
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
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Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
