One Last Song

I'm starting a new screamo band and i wrote this song about my friend and his girfriend, please tell me if you like it or hate it.

this is how the story ends,
dystany has failed again,
one more night left unfilled,
and one more relationship killed,
how could you lead me on,
time to sing one last song
about you...

and time will tell,
if we can just be friends,
and maybe someday,
we will try this again,
but i need you to know,
until then,
this isn't your fault,
the fingers being pointed at me again

im sorry for
all the things i do,
and all the times,
i was mean to you,
it's too late,
to take it all back,
if only i,
had one last chance...

(Duet Between me and a girl)

i thought i was your everything, i wish you'd come,
but now your words, have lost meaning, and pick me up,
i thought if i helped you, but here i lay,
youd help me,(HOLD OUT ME) and your no where to be scene,
i cant beleive i picked you up, the tears i shead,
to be thrown to the ground, when no one else is around,
and you just let me be, can't help me now,
i love you do you love me(HOLD OUT ME) as i lay on the cold ground
i wish i had a tool, im so sorry
to fix everything, i hurt you,
but after all of this is done, if you take me back,
this is the last thing ill do...(Hold do) its the last thing ill do...(hold do)

(Screaming part)

ignoring me now,
and i dont know how,
to be your friend,
when you wont let me in,
and i look at my feet,
as i walk through these halls,
avoid your face,
as i pass these walls...

The duet is song with me and his ex-girlfriend :D i think thats funny