I posted this in Sunday's Song writting group , and I want to to share it with everyone else who does not go to Sunday song Writters . One point please I know this does not add up to 12 but it's A true tale about my brothers .
"A tribute to those Brothers of mine"
Years from then
Looking back at the good ol days with them
We were thick as thieves
Closer than leaves
But time changes everything
Where are we going now
What is the use
We took all the abuse
Will some one show me how
There's Robbie laying there thinking he's fab
Twenty years later my mate & brother he was stabbed
Oh yes there's Johnny we called Ringo
Speaking Aussie lingo
I'm sitting by his side
Years later he went and committed suicide
Where are we going now
What is the use
We took all the abuse
Will some one show me how
Just to our right
Is big brother mike
He was a little older
When it came to dares
He was bolder
Ha Ha I see Dag's as well
Looking very smart and brash
Smiling away what's he trying to sell
Lost his life in a auto crash
Where are we going now
What is the use
We took all the abuse
Will some one show me how
When we were kids we numbered twelve
People now say don't sit around and dwell
Forty years on we only number five
The only remaining little boys alive
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
Hey King Lotto
Deep man very deep touched a heart string here man
nice solid lyrics and terrific flow
very sad topic but it sounds like it comes from the heart and one must admire that alone
the chorus is the only ( bit ) where you might like to look at ? maybe but man bravo for having the guts to write this and post it
keep it real man
:(
Yeah Baby Yeah
very deep man.
i give you props for writing on such a topic.
kepp writing, youre good at it :wink:
thanks ,
PsYcHoNIK and XXXX
nice to know you liked it
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I post all my songs usally in S S G if you want to take a look at other material I have done
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
:) Hello Lotto..true is best...yes!
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
