Hey, wrote this song yesterday but just CANNOT find a chorus to fit...was wondering if anyone would like to help write a chorus for us.....
But um....tell me what you think of the song n any changes you think i should make....
Russian Dolls
V1
I stand by your open window
Under the silver glow of the moon
Beneath the gold flames of the street lights
I lead the sparkle of the stars upto you
Cuz just with open eyes
Theres nothing we cant see
So will you leave the world behind
And fly away with me
(Chorus needed :cry: )
V2
I see the beauty in your eyes
Like the glisten of an emerald sea
Your warmth burns throughout the night
Like an enternal flame of belief
Cuz the past has burnt away
This moments all that is real
An now i know that we are safe
Now i know this dream is real
Rain Shadow
embrace me, accept me
take my hand and fllyyyyy
lets believe and make this real
lets make this real toniiiiight
:D
AUTOGRAPHED ESP George Lynch Sunburst Tiger
I like that, a beautiful image.
I suspect you will come up with something on your own, but I'll give it a shot.
Believe in dreams
with eyes open wide
close them - you slip away
like the stars at sunrise
I look forward to seeing what you end up with. :!:
You don't HAVE to have a chorus, you know.
The king of rock, some say lives
the lizard king, is surely dead
the king of France, lost his head
the King of Kings... bled
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wow...really good choruses guys!!...ill try to mix um both n use...wow....really good!!...and yeah Sherman...i know, but ive arranged the music before the lyrics and ive arranged a peice for a chorus.....thats why i have to a chorus really............
Cheers again people
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Rain Shadow
