Sorry to butt in MP3

Happy New Year all.

I have taken quite a break from the forum. The end of 2004 was a sad one for me. I lost my father. I went back to Australia to see him. Got there Monday --- saw him Monday afternoon and he passed away Tuesday morning before I could see him again. I guess I can be thankful I got to see him before I go. Doesn't really feel that way at the moment though. But hey, I dont want to drag everyone. Life goes on eh.
Anyway, I posted one on here a while back called More Than Chemistry and I have finally put it to music. I recorded this using the built in mic on my laptop so it is pretty sketchy and still feel it is unfinished. It has no bridge. But, I wanted to get it out there for you guys to see what you think. Here are the lyrics from the original post.

More Than Chemistry.

Will you; walk this road with me
And Wont you; share this load with me
And Will you; speak that I may see
Oh Wont you; walk this road with me

Will you; walk this road with me together
Oh Baby; this could be you and me forever
I see that; look you've been giv'n me and
Baby its plain to see; its more than chemistry; more than chemistry oh

When you; wear those things for me
Wont you; take them off for me
And Do you; ever think of me
When you; wear those things for me

Your doin; all you can inside to fight it
And Im doin; all I can outside to ride it
You see that; look I've been given you and
Baby its all you can do to; keep from having me;
cause its more than chemisty yeah

Solo or something in here.

Now I; hear that you may speak
And I will; give so you wont seek
And if you; see my will is weak
Oh Wont you; kiss me on the cheek

And will you; walk this road with me together
Im think'n; if we aren't now then we aint ever
It may take; two fools such as we to
Fail out of chemistry but; we're more than chemistry yeah

We're more than chemistry oh

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/thejackal71music.htm

BTW -- only lo fi works at the moment.

As always, any feedback is much appreciated.

TheJackal.