your mom is a petri dish
your dad's an eye dropper
incubated in a beaker
kept warm by a stopper
you were raised by scientists
your progress was charted
they planned out your life
from the moment it started
you grew up in the papers
they studied you in school
when you fell in love
there were a million eyes on you
chorus:
test-tube baby
on display for the world
test-tube baby
you're my test-tube girl
:lol:
Great! Sometimes a humorous lightedhearted song is just what people need! Plan on putting it to music?
"You know, it eez possible to be too attractive." - Pepe le Pew
"Be excellent to each other, and party on dudes." - Bill and Ted
Didn't think it's lightweighted, far from it!
I like it because it scratches an interesting but frightening part of science!
I would like to read more of this test tube baby. It has potential for a story over a few lyrics (oh god, I think I have a vision. Now I feel like I'm back again ;)
Or you could write a few more paragraphs.
It feels like the story had just begun!
Anyhow it's strange that there's just ONE chorus sung ONE time and this is at the END...
Don't get me wrong, I like it, but I am kinda disappointed that it stops in the middle of a story...
NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!
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the chorus isn't just one time at the end. it would probably go after every verse, but there's no music or structure yet. as for more verses, it was 645 am when i wrote this, and i just had to fall asleep, or else i would have written more.
