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(@sunsetgun)
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AYe, I'm new to these boards... This is a song for this girl that passed away in here sleep at the age of 14, when i was in 8th grade... I thought it would be cool to write her a song, there aren't any vocals yet... still trying to see in i can get sumone to do it, else i'm gonna have to :shock: lol nah, it's no thing to sing! 'If you can talk you can sing, if you can walk you can dance' Zimbabwe proverb

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=617948&songID=4590907

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Posted : 27/10/2006 3:48 pm
(@smokindog)
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Welcome to guitar noise! Wow I liked it, I think you have some good ideas. I think you should try the vocals yourself, then you can always have someone else redo them ( thats my usual MO :lol: ) Kind of reminds me a bit of Niel Young. I listened to this one also.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=617948&songID=4591028
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Posted : 27/10/2006 8:16 pm
(@margaret)
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+1 on what Smokindog said! I like it, too, and welcome!

Margaret

When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~

 
Posted : 27/10/2006 9:03 pm
(@97reb)
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I really liked the feel of it, but the sound was a little too much treble/highs. I'd try to get a little more bass and mids in it. Otherwise, as said, I can hear a little Neil Young similarity.

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Posted : 28/10/2006 12:55 pm
(@smokehouse)
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welcome good stuff 8) smoke

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Posted : 29/10/2006 6:20 am
(@dan-t)
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Welcome to GN, and good job on your song. I'd like to hear more bass & mids too, but the overall song is good. How about doing it with the vocals too?

Dan

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Posted : 30/10/2006 11:32 am