confusion - first try

well ive had a bit of an up and down time in my life these past few weeks, so i thought id come up with something that made me smile which this did. at the moment the recording is very rough as me and my group recorded it live with a rubbish mp3 recorder. All criticism welcome and advice very welcome.

here are the lyrics:

Spoken
confusion, you've left it in my head//
i dont know where im going baby, id rather be dead//

Verse 1
i need sometime to think to myself//
and workout if i need some help//
i dont know where i am, at this point in life//
too busy trying to deal with stress and strife//

Bridge
oh there's so many things, dont know what life will bring//
dont know where ill go, or how old i'll grow//

Chrous
well ive come to this crossroads//
and i dont know which way im going to go//
i always end up questioning reality//
while im searching for me//

Spoken
now, it's all so clear//
how i longed for you, but cant hold you near//

Verse2
nothing in this life ever comes for free//
im trying to find what will let me be//
i need to get along with everyone//
but my responsibilities weigh a tonne//

Bridge
now i need to know, where i stand in life//
where i stand with you, girl you know i strive//

Chorus
now that ive past the crossroads//
i can see where im going to go//
no confusion left inside my head//
guna keep straight until im dead//

Spoken
so now you know, just how i feel//
how me and you, could of been so real//
i showed my feelings,and you tore them away//
but ill carry on, till the end of my days//

and heres the link to the song of course:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=514800

Thanks in advance for comments and criticism.