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(@fleaaaaaa)
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Here is a song i wrote about on the waterfront http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FgpIOGvgZgo

together we stand, divided we fall..........

 
Posted : 21/06/2007 7:27 pm
(@dan-t)
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Can't say I remember that movie, but nice song anyways. 8)

Dan

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Posted : 22/06/2007 2:03 am
(@mrjonesey)
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Nice song. Definitely from the heart.

"There won't be any money. But when you die, on your death bed, you will receive total conciousness. So, I got that going for me. Which is nice." - Bill Murray, Caddyshack ~~ Michigan Music Dojo - http://michiganmusicdojo.com ~~

 
Posted : 22/06/2007 2:12 am
(@dogbite)
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that is a classic movie. everyone needs to see that.
dude, that is a heartfelt song. try and learn to sing from not so high
in your throat. singing works so much better if you sing from your abdomen.
that way you use more of your lungs for wind and your vocal chords
to shape the sound of the note.
we are instruments after all. :)

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Posted : 22/06/2007 2:54 am
(@clazon)
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Wow.

I can honestly say that is a very well written song. Love the chorus.

If you really did it up and sent it into an American TV show it would be perfect for those heart wrenching ending montages. That's the kind of feeling I got from it and I have to tell you, I love those parts of the show. The music is always great.

Keep writing more!

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Posted : 22/06/2007 6:25 am
(@fleaaaaaa)
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Thanks guys :D

together we stand, divided we fall..........

 
Posted : 22/06/2007 10:49 am
(@gerry)
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Great film and this one is clearly from the pump. Great advice from dogbite.

Nice one,

gerry

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Posted : 22/06/2007 7:27 pm