well,(except for the piano part)...this is the link to the song I have been working on(I,m slow)...feel free to chime in with any remarks...technical responses are welcome also...
If Heaven Holds A Place by(JACook)
Do you think that Heaven holds a place for a man like me?
One who knows his wrong from his right.
One who's made all the wrong choices all along,
One who just-hasn't seen the light?
And it doesn't seem fair, and it doesn't seem right,
That Heaven would hold a place for me...
I still look at the stars on a cold October's night,
Wondering why - why am I here?
They're so big and bright and I am so small,
The answers are never really clear.
And it doesn't seem fair, and it doesn't seem right,
That Heaven would hold a place for me...
But if Heaven even holds a place for me,
The best thing I could hope to do,
Is take the place that Heaven holds for me ,
And give it to you.
Sometimes the answers to the questions I ask myself,
Are much more than I can bear.
The truth runs deeper than what meets the eye,
And I wonder why you'd care.
And it doesn't seem fair, and it doesn't seem right,
That Heaven would hold a place for me...
But if Heaven even holds a place for me,
The best thing I could hope to do,
Is take the place that Heaven holds for me ,
And give it to you.
Give my place in heaven to you.
Just give it to you.
Well, I'd give it to you.
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
That guitar intro sounded great. And the vocals fit nicely. Very nice job
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
Dneck,,thx for the kind words....my vocals have a half tone range(never the same tho) and I eqed the heck out of them..still sounds like I,ve got gravel in my throat!.
Too bad we are not living in the same part of the country....(so we could jam) I like the music you have showcased online....thought there was some Allman Bros. influence on the "ejam" track.....!!! ya gotta love the south...
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
Nice song!
I have my player set to repeat and I got started with another computer related project and before I knew it, it was about a half hour later. I thought, "boy this is a long song."
:D
Bish
"I play live as playing dead is harder than it sounds!"
very nice, I liked the lead guitar. Its one of my goals to play some leads like that...mine are not as consistent.
cooker,
I can't seem to get the link to open. Keep getting an error message. Is the link broken perhaps? Or is it just me?
Margaret
When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~
heyyyyyyyyyy...
That sounds great to me :)
Sounds like you laid down the rythm then the leads? So two Guitar Tracks?
And do I hear maybe two vocal tracks too?
Very Nice :)
Research is what I'm doing when I don't know what I'm doing. - Wernher Von Braun (1912-1977)
Margaret..you send it links only last seven days..I reposted with a new link....
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
Dagwood.. 1 acoustic,, 1continuous lead...1 vocal
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
