Greenday- Time of Your life
not a massive fan of this band but this song is a great song so thought i would give it a try so check it out and give me some feedback of what you guys think :)
hey. good song. you have a cool voice. sure wish I could sing like you.
critique: voice is very good. your are on pitch. your dynamics work well.
the guitar has a nice tone. you have good rhythm.
I hate that the rhythm was the same up/down pattern throughout the whole song.
vary the beat length of a chord by letting it sustain, instead of strumming the beat; for example.
the guitar can become as emotional as the voice with any song.
especially so with this song.
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I was noodling around with the strumming instead of picking it, and found a pattern that you might want to try.
Bass note, down strum, pause, Up, Down, Up....repeat until you get to the part where it gets faster, then change it up some.
In Space, no one can hear me sing!
Good, I agree with the gtr stuff, but I tink is good cause I cn feel you hve a style.
