Hello. First some background info, my name is Randy, I'm 16 years old, and I come from a small town in alberta, canada. It's a dead end town, but I made my mind up to use music as more of an excape from this town, and everything in general. I played guitar off and on, but I bought a new acoustic 2 months ago and since then I've been right into it. I recorded some stuff, and burned some cd's to get people's opinion. 4 days later everyone is really into it, and I'm in a band as well now. The following is links to 2 songs, if it's not to much trouble could you please take a look and tell me what you think.
Runaway-
" http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/randysongs/Runaway.mp3 "
All we can hope for-
" http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/randysongs/Allwecanhopefor.mp3 "
Thank you for your opinion.
It's All we could hope for
Cool stuff with both of them...Good playing
However, I think that the first one is to long. It's good, but its very repetitive, maybe cutting down on the length might help? The same for the second I can say the same thing.
They were both very good, especially considering how long you've been playing for. Well done.
I kept waiting for vocals to come in on both of them.
The king of rock, some say lives
the lizard king, is surely dead
the king of France, lost his head
the King of Kings... bled
( email me at esherman@wideopenwest.(com). I almost never check my hotmailaccount.
nice playing considering how long u have been playing for mate..well done keep up the good work,sherman u love having a dig at people,gee people up man.
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
