Hello everyone
Innerdream has written and recorded a new song – As I Close My Eyes (music and lyrics by Paul Martin) – please feel free to have a listen via the link below and your feedback on the song all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc) is most welcome
Please bear in mind this is only the 1st draft version of the song and a new version will be uploaded in the near future – the link is below
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=252119
Lyrics
Is it too late to say I'm sorry for all the troubles I have caused you in your life?
I didn't mean to make you worry - I've been a fool for never understanding why
Are we heading towards the end?
Could it be our last goodbye?
I've been so high and low, far from the seas unknown
Will you take my hand and lead me forever?
Whisper the words unknown and they will guide me home
As I close my eyes I see dreams forever
Is it too late to say I'm sorry for all the troubles I have caused you in your life?
I didn't mean to make you worry - I've been a fool for never understanding why
My guardian angel until the end of time
Looking onwards far beyond this life
I've been so high and low, far from the seas unknown
Will you take my hand and lead me forever?
Whisper the words unknown and they will guide me home
As I close my eyes I see dreams forever
(c) PFM 19/12/2005
I didn't get to listen to the song yet (still at work) but I think the lyrics are really good - simple and easy to understand without being tooo basic...
I didn't get to listen to the song yet (still at work) but I think the lyrics are really good - simple and easy to understand without being tooo basic...
Thanks for the reply :D