Is this so bad no one will comment on it?

That's pretty good Cringe. I really can't say anything bad about it. It would make a great tune to play while rolling the credits of some great movie! It really flows nicely. Good stuff :)

I had to edit this post. I had written something else to describe the movie, but it came out "bad donkey movie!! :oops:
I forgot this site was family friendly. Sorry.

It is a kind of dull right now, still working on lyrics and getting a friend to do vocals. I can't sing at all.

hey the timing sounds like it hiccups a few times, might want to try recording one track to a metronome. Musically though it sounds good but I agree with you that it feels a little dull. I like the changes, but the main part in the beginning doesnt really grab you melodically. Its not bad you just asked for criticism hah nice job.

This is really good--I like it a lot. 8)

Margaret

Thanks Margaret. What would you change?

Thanks Margaret. What would you change?

I can't really come up with anything specific I'd change. I'm listening on some crummy headphones, so maybe it's just that, but the quality is somewhat muddy. I'd love to hear this really professionally produced.

I like all the layers going on within it. Not sure it needs vocals--it doesn't for me, anyway.

Margaret

i agree with metronone comment ands thats only because i am going through the same thing myself, i could never get on with metronomes but what have done now is set it to speed i want and played a drum track to it on a keyboard and then play guitar to drum track. so now i have really confused you i,ll clear off.....by the way guitar sounds ok to me .....smoke

I realize the time isn't perfect but where is it really messed up? I guess I'm not hearing it.