Hello everyone
I have written and recorded a new song – Stormy Skies – please feel free to have a listen via the link below and your feedback on the song all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc) is most welcome
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=252119
Lyrics
Each word you speak to me makes me now believe, makes me start to dream
Sometimes the doubts still fill my mind
Was it just a dream or just another broken lie?
I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun
Someday I'll fly away
Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts
Someday I'll fly away
Everyday I start to cry
Searching for answers I must find
Everyday I question why
My life is like the stormy skies
Each time you come to me, deep inside my heart I feel were apart
Once we were stronger every day
Now it seems the memory has slowly ebbed away
I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun
Someday I'll fly away
Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts
Someday I'll fly away
Everyday I start to cry
Searching for answers I must find
Everyday I question why
My life is like the stormy skies
(c) PFM 07/11/05
Long song. Just finished listening to it. Typically not my kind of song but sounded pretty good. Nice playing and nice singing. You have a good strong voice.
Long song. Just finished listening to it. Typically not my kind of song but sounded pretty good. Nice playing and nice singing. You have a good strong voice.
Thanks for the comments Nils :D Glad you liked the song :D
Me thinks you have some talent :D :D nice song and I liked the dynamics. the guitarist is great also. you guys got a lot going on 8) 8) Thanks for posting this on the forum :!: --the dog
Me thinks you have some talent :D :D nice song and I liked the dynamics. the guitarist is great also. you guys got a lot going on 8) 8) Thanks for posting this on the forum :!: --the dog
Cheers for the kind words :D - I think using keyboards and guitar harmonies adds a lot of dynamics to the song
