http://www.myspace.com/azazelmetal Everyone do me a favor before you listen make sure you read the lyrics section for it will open your mind for a journey of that never visited before. This is the first time i have ever recorded my voice so be easy on me but i hope you like it and leave me some feed back.Thanks for all your support.
nice job. can I make one suggestion?
I liked your vocal when it felt less like a narration
and more like a rhythmic accent.
the narration sounded too preachy and felt astranged from the beats.
there was a moment when it linked up and created a polyrhythm;
it got more interesting and sophisticated then.
interesting arrangement, good with light effects i bet :twisted: :twisted:
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Hey thanks alot for listening guys, I am not a singer, this is the first time i have ever recorded vocals, but i will get better, what do you mean about the poly rhythm??I understand the preaching, i dont want to do that but if i do i guess its not horrible because i practice what i preach but if anything i would rather some musical then preach you know, give me some pointers if you have any. i thank you guys for your support and hope to hear back from you about the vocals because i really want to learn how to make it better.thanks again.
I dont mean preaching, as in from the pulpit. I meant it sounded preachy, narrative, normal speaking without regard to the beat.
there was a moment near the beginning where your vocal had a rap type rhythm...but not rapping per se. your sylables had a beat that played against the driving overall beat...hence, polyrhythm. that is where it got my attention.
well i felt it would be better to start as you have but then burst it open into a clear sound with a full sing vocal rather than keep the dark secret voice going, you could have returned to that at the end...but hey this is all peoples opinions and i am not a record producer...so its what you really like that counts,dogbite has good points there..best...smoke
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Hey i understand i wanted to do the same thing and i might still do something like that but first of all im not a singer so i have to practice alot more before i put vocals that i will actually like out there, i can scream but who says thats singing you know haha, i just had to put something to my music because people want vocals no matter what they are they would rather hear them then not hear them.I still dont get it about the voice not fitting, i tried the best i could to fit the song but i want to know you mean, because i want to learn and its people like you that can help me learn, thanks for your support and i hope to hear back from you.
