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Your singing is a little pitchy but the song is cool. Okay this is just an opinion thing coming......now brace yourself: instead of used to say, maybe try "Just like my daddy'd say. He'd say." It doesn't sound as forced. Just try it. You can shoot me later. Try the solo clean w/o effects using the neck pickup if your guitar has one. I think it could sound really cool. The song is pretty classic folk rock sounding. Kinda free birdish but to be honest I'd rather listen to your song....no really. Free bird just gets on my nerves. Just my opinion. Keep it up.

I like the Tascam Test- Nice tone and kinda raw 8) You should develop that idea into something :D ---the dog

thanks guys

im fine with any suggestion so dont be afraid

that is a good idea, i think ill start doing that when i play it

the dog-

your the 2nd person to reall dig that one

thanks

i got the drum beat off my keyboard lol

do you think its to santana esq?

nice song.

Your rhythm playing sounds great, really beautiful, nice tone, over all good. The lead guitar sounds good, but needs a little work. Be careful about going out of key, that can kill a solo. The first solo sounds pretty good, it's short, to the point, and not too wild, however it does sound out of key right in the begining. Also, the sound of the lead guitar scrapes can be heard before you start the solo, while you are singing... If you're recording with more than one track, edit that stuff out.

The 2nd solo is too loud in the mix, it's over powering the rhythm and the vocals.

The vocals are pretty good, you sound a bit like Bob Dylan actually. However, you sing out of key several times, like Hue said, it's a bit "pitchy". Most noticibly when you go into the chorus "He used to say soul shine"...

Try singing along to notes you're playing on your guitar, record your self and see how well you match. It's good ear training and singing practice.

I like the song, and you're playing has gotten a lot better. Just a few kinks to work out :)

Taso